Roots Of Eden

~*~

Endless miles of eternity,

Rain birdsong of blood and tears.

Ring the bell of mortality,

And cast away your fears.

 

Oooh oooh oooh~

 

Trade in your humanity,

For the legend of insanity.

Come now, come with me,

And live in never ending futility.

 

Oooh oooh oooh~

 

Cast aside the roots of Eden,

The light of day.

Your palms most surely will redden,

And your mind will sway.

 

Oooh oooh oooh~

Author's Note

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This is an interesting start to the book. The flow was amazing. I know that it will flow nicely with the plot. I can't wait to read the story. It seems so interesting. And this was dark, but it was beautiful. Thank you for sharing.

[Bluefire]

Thank you for reading and reviewing! ^^

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Hmmm... interesting is this Based off the
Anime Eden of the East or no ??


I love the First stanza's
very refreshing at the
last line.


Love the Music nice touch
also.

Endless miles of eternity,

Rain birdsong of blood and tears.

Ring the bell of mortality,

And cast away your fears.


Thank you for sharing. Blessings. kindred poet

[Bluefire]

Dunno where this came from. It just showed up on the doorstep of my mind and begged me to take it in.
Thank you for reading and reviewing! ^^

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

you're very welcome. My pleasure. Ha...Ha I love how you said that, Dunno where this came from. It just showed up on the doorstep of my mind and begged me to take it in.


Blessings. kindred poet

[Bluefire]

x3 Dunno where that came from either.

[Gleb Zavlanov]

A very interesting piece. Were the "ooh's" a part of some chorus? If they are, it'll sound nice.

[Bluefire]

Yes, they are. It's meant to be a song.
Thank you! ^^

[Silent Wolf]

Interesting. I like the approach of this, dark yet... calming. I on't know, maybe that's jtus my dark side reacting 3:) Lol.

[Bluefire]

Thank you! ^^

[Silent Wolf]

Welcome :)