Roots Of Eden

Roots Of Eden

A Chapter by Bluefire
"

The bell of mortality.

"

~*~

Endless miles of eternity,

Rain birdsong of blood and tears.

Ring the bell of mortality,

And cast away your fears.

 

Oooh oooh oooh~

 

Trade in your humanity,

For the legend of insanity.

Come now, come with me,

And live in never ending futility.

 

Oooh oooh oooh~

 

Cast aside the roots of Eden,

The light of day.

Your palms most surely will redden,

And your mind will sway.

 

Oooh oooh oooh~



© 2014 Bluefire


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This is an interesting start to the book. The flow was amazing. I know that it will flow nicely with the plot. I can't wait to read the story. It seems so interesting. And this was dark, but it was beautiful. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Bluefire

10 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and reviewing! ^^
Hmmm... interesting is this Based off the
Anime Eden of the East or no ??


I love the First stanza's
very refreshing at the
last line.


Love the Music nice touch
also.

Endless miles of eternity,

Rain birdsong of blood and tears.

Ring the bell of mortality,

And cast away your fears.


Thank you for sharing. Blessings. kindred poet

Posted 10 Years Ago


Bluefire

10 Years Ago

Dunno where this came from. It just showed up on the doorstep of my mind and begged me to take it in.. read more
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

you're very welcome. My pleasure. Ha...Ha I love how you said that, Dunno where this came from. .. read more
Bluefire

10 Years Ago

x3 Dunno where that came from either.
A very interesting piece. Were the "ooh's" a part of some chorus? If they are, it'll sound nice.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Bluefire

10 Years Ago

Yes, they are. It's meant to be a song.
Thank you! ^^
Interesting. I like the approach of this, dark yet... calming. I on't know, maybe that's jtus my dark side reacting 3:) Lol.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Bluefire

10 Years Ago

Thank you! ^^
Silent Wolf

10 Years Ago

Welcome :)

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