Wish I Was
A Poem by
BL
Wish I was the breeze
Floating by
Gliding over land and sea
Free and easy
Seeing you there
I would kiss your face
Wish I was an Eagle
On warm golden air
An overlord of bronze
With all seeing eyes
I would swoop down
And take you to the clouds
Wish I was the ocean
With power all around
Ever fresh and surging
Forever at your shores
Trying to reach you and
Dying on your beaches
© 2022 BL
Reviews
Beautiful flowing effortless poem of unity and harmony, balance in all. Being at one with mother nature. Breathing, living and fulfillment of presence.
Posted 4 Years Ago
our connection with nature is undeniable. this speaks to me of freedom, innocence and rising anonymously above withtout being tied to identity. so much can be gleaned from this free-flowing journey removed from the things of life that hold us down. i will have to read the multiple times. i love your analogies and anything to do with nature. there is a wonderful spiritual aspect. good stuff ... :)
Posted 4 Years Ago
our connection with nature is undeniable. this speaks to me of freedom, innocence and rising anonymously above withtout being tied to identity. so much can be gleaned from this free-flowing journey removed from the things of life that hold us down. i will have to read the multiple times. i love your analogies and anything to do with nature. there is a wonderful spiritual aspect. good stuff ... :)
makes you want to be free,mystical,
Posted 4 Years Ago
makes you want to be free,mystical,
4 Years Ago
And this is a good thing 😊
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What I read here is "I wish I was anonymous." The narrator conveys a desire to observe and touch from a distance, to hide or conceal their identity, perhaps to avoid pain, perhaps to possess supernatural powers that give and impose love. A moving poem that leaves the reader wanting to know the narrator a little more. An excellent write.
Posted 4 Years Ago
What I read here is "I wish I was anonymous." The narrator conveys a desire to observe and touch from a distance, to hide or conceal their identity, perhaps to avoid pain, perhaps to possess supernatural powers that give and impose love. A moving poem that leaves the reader wanting to know the narrator a little more. An excellent write.
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Wish I was able to find this sooner. ;)
Posted 4 Years Ago
Wish I was able to find this sooner. ;)
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Ahh, yes, that is how it feels...
Posted 4 Years Ago
Ahh, yes, that is how it feels...
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Simple, effective, with a touch of romanticism.
Posted 4 Years Ago
Simple, effective, with a touch of romanticism.
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A feel of a free spirit rendered in a poetic beauty!
Posted 5 Years Ago
A feel of a free spirit rendered in a poetic beauty!
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Filled with the air of love and infatuation in a flowing romantic piece.
Posted 5 Years Ago
Filled with the air of love and infatuation in a flowing romantic piece.
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Added on February 6, 2015
Last Updated on January 17, 2022
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BL London, United Kingdom
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