Wish I Was

Wish I Was

A Poem by BL

Wish I was the breeze
Floating by
Gliding over land and sea
Free and easy
Seeing you there
I would kiss your face

Wish I was an Eagle
On warm golden air
An overlord of bronze
With all seeing eyes
I would swoop down
And take you to the clouds

Wish I was the ocean
With power all around
Ever fresh and surging
Forever at your shores
Trying to reach you and
Dying on your beaches




© 2022 BL


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This is quite a beautiful piece

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Full of energy and grand imagination..resonated with me and lifted my spirits up..definitely captivating!

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lovely poem,amazing choice of words...i love the picture it create in my mind...

Posted 8 Years Ago


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This is a beautiful poem! I love the ways you chose things from nature & express them in words jam-packed with sensory imagery. I love the way this summons everything I feel when in nature (which I love to be) & how inspired I feel to write about my love of nature. Thanks for the gift that keeps on giving.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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A magical writing! The way you put words together is like creating a masterful picture from thin air.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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This is really deep, and moving.
I love the way this was written, sounds so poetic, and really had such a strong meaning to it.
This was emotion filled, and romantic and sweet.
I really enjoyed reading this.
Keep writing :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Love the second stanza, a beautiful sereene was wint wisps of longing...just a bit :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


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This is beautiful imagery, all of which is connected to the power of nature, which creates a lovely picture of desire and worship at the feet or shores of that someone special.

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I like it. It's very romantic.Thanks for sharing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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We and our countless wishes.. wish anyone of them came true.. beautiful imagery of desires and longings....

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Added on February 6, 2015
Last Updated on January 17, 2022
Tags: Wish, breeze, Kiss, Face, eagle, Golden, air, wings, Clouds, Ocean, power, Love, want, yearn, crave, long, hope, hanker, fancy, choose, care, free, wild, loose, release, freedom, liberty, ease, easy

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