Great imagery B. Beautifully longing - love from a distance is so hard - we wish to be all things that might reach them so that we reach them.
The final line is heart-wrenching - I couldnt not think of D-Day - an invasion - willing to die for a greater cause.
I enjoyed this B - thank you for sharing. :)
I love this poem; it is like a peaceful dream of wishes; calm and lovely, showing such sweet affections in the most descriptive use of words; the metaphors are light and wonderful. Wish I was the ocean - With power all around -Ever fresh and surging -Forever at your shores - Trying to reach you and Dying on your beaches. Wow. Bravo B. Thank you. Dale
Posted 9 Years Ago
This comment has been deleted by the poster.
This comment has been deleted by this poetry author.
Very good description in the poem. I liked the use of repetition to establish your places and thoughts. The poem had a positive feel till the last line. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote