The Slow Moving Water Will Kill Us All One Day

The Slow Moving Water Will Kill Us All One Day

A Poem by Bluemerlin

A volcano births
The stone that sits forever, 
Till rain beats it down.

© 2014 Bluemerlin


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Nice imagery, especially in the first line. Good job :)

-QuanaWana

Posted 8 Years Ago


this is an interesting Haiku. The first line doesnt really make any sense though

Posted 8 Years Ago


Bluemerlin

8 Years Ago

In a less redacted form:

A mighty volcano gives birth in an instant
To the ston.. read more
Bluemerlin

8 Years Ago

I hoping to imply the rest through the title

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