My Cage

Trapped in a cage
With nothing else to do
So i just sit alone
filled with thoughts of you

Reminiscing when time stood still
Wishing i could break my will
Trapped in my own mind
Wishing for more time

Oh the things i wish i could prove
The feelings i would try to move
Time to be claimed mine
Im sure ill eventually be fine

Trapped in this cage
With nothing to do
So im just gonna think of you

Author's Note

Reviews

[James Paranormal]

this has a laced rhyme scheme, and works well, crafty and tragic in it romantic meaning.

[Hopefull]

Thank you it’s just how I like to write

[light and ashes]

Poignant read.. very enjoyable.

[Hopefull]

lol are you just making your rounds on my stuff lol thanks for the read and the kind words.

[light and ashes]

I am lol
I hope that's ok.

[Hopefull]

Thats what its here for lol
i dont mine one bit.

[light and ashes]

:) lol cool

[Chris Shaw]

Mental imprisonment can be torture. Your poem reminded me of a caged bird who wants to break free. You have expressed your feelings well here. A promising read.

Chris

[Hopefull]

Thanks for taking the time to read and the kind words.

[Davidgeo]

Not too shabby. A little creepy and slightly depressing but, at least it was written well. And if you're in the right mood that's a really good song you posted underneath.

[Hopefull]

Thank you for taking the time to read it. Im am slightly curious why you believe its creepy though.

[Davidgeo]

Cages are creepy to me. I didn't mean it in a derisive way.

[Davidgeo]

… it's just how I feel about cages.

[Hopefull]

Ohhh the cpage is ap figure of speech. Can be interpreted as the mind. But litterally refers to my line of work. I sit byself for hours trapped with my thoughts.