Broken

Its been months now.
Crying staring at the ground.
An uncontrollable notion.
So easy to set in motion.

Torrents of memories,
How i wish this were easy.
Thoughts of you flood my mind,
They never fade even in time.

I feel so alone in my own home,
Something i wish ide never have known.
Why must fate treat me this way,
I was truly happy in my everyday.

Without you im struggling the most,
I hate the feeling of being a ghost.
I needed you more than you know,
I hate the thought of watching you go.

There was so much left to see,
I hate this feeling it wasnt meant to be.
Why was our time so short,
There was so much left to sort.

I loved you with all i had,
I hope i wasnt all to bad.
In the future i hope i see,
One with you and me meant be.

That future may be unlikely,
That doesn't stop me from thinking nightly.
Oh how i wish to see you again,
I never thought this was how it would end.

Its time i finish this thing,
Or else ill keep rambling.
Just know at the end of the day,
Ill probably keep loving you anyway.

Reviews

[Broken.]

This I know all too much about. Hence the name. Beautiful piece. I am excited to read more of your work. My favorite line actually was the end:
"Its time i finish this thing,
Or else ill keep rambling.
Just know at the end of the day,
Ill probably keep loving you anyway. "

It's like you read my mind. Times like these I try to remind myself of the phrase, "This too shall pass."

[Hopefull]

Thanks for the read and kind words. Hope all is well

[Chris Shaw]

Breakups are painful and can leave us feeling broken. The good news is that after a time that hurt starts to soften. You reminded me of times in my life when I felt this way. Your lines have a universal appeal. Many will relate.

Chris

[Hopefull]

Thank you for reading/taking the time to review. i appreciate the kind words.