Don't Close Your Eyes

Don't Close Your Eyes

A Poem by Bohrium Guy
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When you boast externally, you are the one that lives within nightmares when you sleep.

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Don't Close Your Eyes


Stay awake don't fall into a deep sleep,

Your illusions you've painted will creep.

Claiming such beauty, loyalty above all,

Their all nipping at your feet have a ball.


Tell tales of lust and creed falling on you,

How they want you or what they will do.

How cold and abscessed you need no one,

Reality is hard your emotions you've done.


Walk with a stride you think you're perfect,

Mind playing tricks as you struggle respect.

Remember this your see-thru to me and lies,

Nightmares come so don't close your eyes.

© 2020 Bohrium Guy


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There is a lot said here. Illusions do bite into reality and leads us to a false sense of self. Sometimes its so powerful that we struggle with it. An exaggerated sense of perfection can become a nightmare. So yes, it seems a good suggestion not to close ones eyes. Thank you.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bohrium Guy

10 Months Ago

Thank you for the nice review. Always good to see someone actually read my poems :)

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There is a lot said here. Illusions do bite into reality and leads us to a false sense of self. Sometimes its so powerful that we struggle with it. An exaggerated sense of perfection can become a nightmare. So yes, it seems a good suggestion not to close ones eyes. Thank you.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bohrium Guy

10 Months Ago

Thank you for the nice review. Always good to see someone actually read my poems :)

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Added on May 4, 2020
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Tags: Betrayal, childish behavior

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Bohrium Guy
Bohrium Guy

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