APOGEE

It's my aging heart.
It's my weakest of mind.
It's my broken spirit.
It's today I send my bleeding feelings to the safest point of our universe.

The wind has blown it.
The sun has seen it's last flickering.
As the rain puts out remaining burning embers.

My heart that seems to always catch the deadliest of the bugs viruses, is now floating up safely to APOGEE.

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Read the title, thought, checked.. and still unsure to the ending.. but, your words are so intense, you feel that the worst is done, over.. and that must be some kind of comfort. Life seems to be a fleet of hurdles , if not all the time but often - too often. But comes a time when you think nothing worse can happen, hits home so hard, numbs you and you pause.. wait, think, then realise it's how it is.. If that is what that title means for you.. it's an incredibly personal and courageous write,

[Bonnie Paige]

I do love the fact that I have made other writers look up the titles meaning.
Finding words that move me enough to create. But most writers are in love with words.
Where better to place ones many times broken heart but to the farthest unreachable point?
TY for your review.

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Before i decided to comment on this poem. I checked out what is meaning of word apogee. At begging of your poem you start describing some dark event happen . It's actually very smooth and i feel how all fading in slow motion. Your words are caring last remains something very important. At end of poem your heart feel sutendly free . Maybe cause there is some higher point of relive at your life direction.

[Bonnie Paige]

Thank You Poet's Act the word APOGEE is seldom used in today's language but by you looking up that word, you did what I hope others will do. Look it up. We the writers of stories and poetry have such amazing words to paint our writings with. So here's to many new words for you to discover.

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This is actually very true. Since I am not native English speaker. Everyday I find some new word and some new expressions. So thank you for new word what I can use at some of my future writing.

[John the Baptist]

Has the sound of one who has been through the wringer and back. I get the feeling the last straw has been drawn, and now the speaker is through with it all. Not sure what this means for the future.

[Bonnie Paige]

Hey John the Baptist
I thought you lost your head lol.
Not a whole lot of future left. But I read the word Apogee and the poem came poring out. Where else do you place a shattered heart for protection.
Thanks for the review. I really appreciate it.