The Question

The Question

A Poem by Holly
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A question i have always asked!

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We are sitting on a cliff,
Looking at the sky,
Seeing the clouds, we are wondering why,
why do they fly?
why do they fly?
why do the they have to be, way up there?
why can't they be right down here?
that is The Question.

© 2012 Holly


Author's Note

Holly
Just a little something i thought of while sitting with my cat. he inspires me. PLEASE REVIEW!!!!!

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Short, but it doesn't need to be longer. Well written and sweet.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I like the short poetic form. The old cliche "short and sweet" came to mind when I first read it. This is well done, very good work :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I see potential here but try to expand it don't be so shy or quick to end. Jot down some thoughts and combine them all sometimes that helps, Try not to repeat until you figure out your beat haha :)

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on June 24, 2012
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Holly
Holly

Ontario, Canada



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Hello! My name is Holly and I am 16 years old. I love to read, write and spend time with my friends. My favourite authors are: Stephanie Mayor and Kiera Cass. I hope you enjoy my page! -Holly more..

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