A Magical Place

A Magical Place

A Book by Booklover200014
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Jake is a rebellious teenager whose life takes an unexpected turn when he gets sucked inside an old mirror. Now he must find a way to get back to his world with the help of his new friends.

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© 2013 Booklover200014


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I found this story interesting. At first the main character comes off as confident and cool, maybe even immature, but later he turns out to be a caring individual who wants to take care of his mother. I'm curious as to what will happen with this mirror as well.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Booklover200014

6 Years Ago

Awwww... Thank you so much for the review. After posting this chapter, I was a little nervous that n.. read more



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I thought this was a good first draft. It certainly hooked me in, and I'm intrigued to find out what happens next.

There were a few points that I picked up on, but I'm sure you'll pick up on them when you edit it. Overall, a really good effort!

Posted 6 Years Ago


I found this story interesting. At first the main character comes off as confident and cool, maybe even immature, but later he turns out to be a caring individual who wants to take care of his mother. I'm curious as to what will happen with this mirror as well.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Booklover200014

6 Years Ago

Awwww... Thank you so much for the review. After posting this chapter, I was a little nervous that n.. read more

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