To see beyond what's shown you

To see beyond what's shown you

A Poem by Fish, plankton, sea greens...

 

 

world

 

covered

 

truth

 

masked

 

people

 

oppressed

 

 

live in comfort, die in vain

don't wake up-

play

 

 

or

 

listen

to the whispers

 

hear

the faint footsteps in the dark woods

follow the lantern

see where it leads

 

 

© 2008 Fish, plankton, sea greens...


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This was an interesting piece... The jest of what I got was basically you must seize the day or let life pass you by...I love the second part of the piece, after the first six single word lines (I think those could be brought together a little), it gave me a wonderful feel. Nicely done...I look forward to reading more from you.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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This was an interesting piece... The jest of what I got was basically you must seize the day or let life pass you by...I love the second part of the piece, after the first six single word lines (I think those could be brought together a little), it gave me a wonderful feel. Nicely done...I look forward to reading more from you.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like it. Good work. Keep going.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Fish, plankton, sea greens...
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I'm a big science fiction nerd and a bad movie buff, Logan's Run being my all-time favorite, although a bit tacky, the message moves me deeply and I believe that everyone, especially in these times, s.. more..