Loud Silence

Loud Silence

I hear all the unsaid words,

Seen your thoughts crystal clear.

Emotions never meant to be seen;

Written over your face like a script

You keep you to yourself;

Trying not to let it all out.

But i can hear the loud in your quiet

The chaos in the serenity

Why is the silence so loud?

Reviews

[Raven]

while reading this i was thinking of someone i know. well done. put me in a state where i was thinking of someone who can relate.

[Bra.Kofi]

Thank you for the taking time to read and review

[Ted Kniffen]

It's said that silence speaks louder than words. Then, if you read between the lines the silence is deafening. Loud silence speaks volumes. Well done, Bra

[Bra.Kofi]

that's right Ted and thank you for reading and for taking time to review my work

[Diane]

Wow. When I read this poem I think of a person with depression. People closest to them wish they could see their thoughts. When the depressed wishes they can hide them. I am sure it was meant to mean something different, though. Thank you, it was a calming read.

[Bra.Kofi]

thank you Diane for the wonderful review

[Diamond]

silence speaks volumes! for those who really want to hear it!
at some point, all of us judge our relationships on their silence..isn't it?!
beautiful poem!

[Bra.Kofi]

thats very true and thank you for your review

[William Liston]

Good poem. I loved your descriptions.

-William Liston

[Bra.Kofi]

thank you very much.

[Bra.Kofi]

lol thank you for the review and yes its appropriately meant for you.

[Samantha Jenkins]

My face always gives my thoughts and feelings away, I really hate that about me.

I did enjoy reading that, it reminds me too much of me even though it is not about me.

[Bra.Kofi]

thank you very much for your nice review