Fatal Flaws

Fatal Flaws

A Poem by SoozProtege

Fatal flaws effects.

In the journey of life, most have one fatal flaw that's unjust. Lucky me, I got two, they answer to Love, and to Trust. When the walls just come down, just when I'm unfocused. They're unfaithful, untrue, yet very prideful and robust. A wounded healer on struggle street, my hope fully concussed. My frostbitten blood, pumping from a heart ready to combust. So tired of these damp salty dimples, drying from faulty tear ducts. So I'm cementing forever, my hearts portcullis. Drowning the light, cloaking my heart's wanderlust.

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Sounds like a wounded veteran of the relationships wars. There are no defeats except those from which nothing is learned.

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Thank you for your review. I am pretty happy where this one landed. Not all pieces reveal the deligh.. read more

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Added on July 25, 2020
Last Updated on July 26, 2020
Tags: Love, Trust, pain, sorrow



Beaumont, TX

I have been a closet poet for 30 years now, over the last year I have been sharing my work with the world getting rave reviews more..