Past problems #1

Past problems #1

A Poem by Braden Aric

Yet another song I am about how sad I am and why it's her fault.

I wasn't right
but I was the one wronged.
Try to stop everyday
but it went along.
You promised me you'd stay.
I'm not surprised that you did not
even though you said it a lot.

It's happened so many times before
but I though you'd be the one.
Someone to make me feel loved and less alone.

One could say you got away
or say that you escaped
but you didn't leave alone;
you took along your love,
the only love I've ever been given,
and I know this'll never happen again.

You'll always be happy. And I'm
almost glad that you will.
But I wish I could be like you.
Be happy too.

© 2014 Braden Aric

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well written !! creative writing

Posted 9 Years Ago

I think that this does a good job of expressing the blunt pain of being wronged and the one sided emotion that one can feel in this situation.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Braden Aric

9 Years Ago

Thank you!

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Added on May 22, 2014
Last Updated on May 22, 2014


Braden Aric
Braden Aric

Houston, TX

I write a lot of songs through the day and I want other people to see them. This seems like the easiest way. more..