Past problems #1

Yet another song I am about how sad I am and why it's her fault.

I wasn't right
but I was the one wronged.
Try to stop everyday
but it went along.
You promised me you'd stay.
I'm not surprised that you did not
even though you said it a lot.

It's happened so many times before
but I though you'd be the one.
Someone to make me feel loved and less alone.

One could say you got away
or say that you escaped
but you didn't leave alone;
you took along your love,
the only love I've ever been given,
and I know this'll never happen again.

You'll always be happy. And I'm
almost glad that you will.
But I wish I could be like you.
Be happy too.

Reviews

[ankika]

well written !! creative writing

[Gracious]

I think that this does a good job of expressing the blunt pain of being wronged and the one sided emotion that one can feel in this situation.

[Braden Aric]

Thank you!