Battle Cry

Are you going to wait for the worst? or you will now start creating for better world? Here's my cry.

Credits to the owner of this photo.

Floods, tsunamis and earthquakes

They're all natural disasters

War and corruption

It Happens everywhere

Famine, poverty and abortion

Is the aftermath of our situation

I knock once and twice

No one hears my cry

When is the right time?

How we're going to overcome?

Who will start the change?

Who will create better world?

I'm challenging you all

My battle cry for this goal

I badly want change

But still, you do not care

Author's Note

Awake! Awake! Don't enjoy your nightmare.
Be with me and let's start a better world.

Reviews

[Pax]

You know what kabayan, many people have seen this situations. Many do try to be blind on it. Many do who are asleep in this time. This problem is been long here since the growth of man kind. As we multiply the problems stays the same, for some people never do learned. THe best way to spread your words is that make a good example for yourself and let it spread out. CHange starts within oneselves, so start there because I do... Very nice piece.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Nice poem to awaken everyone. They say that we cannot change the world alone, so we have to start from ourselves. If all of us are thinking the same, perhaps your dream would come into reality.

This is great, Kabayan. Keep writing.

[Marl Ignatius G. Igon-igon]

Thank you. :))

[Vidya Bacchus]

you have written your feelings and dared us not to take notice.Bravo well written

[Marl Ignatius G. Igon-igon]

Thanks. I really appreciated it.

[poetdoug]

Awake! Awake!
Great call to Arms for a better world.
Well done my friend. Trust you and yours are safe there today.
Our prayers are with you.

[Marl Ignatius G. Igon-igon]

Thank you. :)