Gone

I wrote it last year and my friend Shadow haze put it on hers for me when i didnt have 1

The tenderness he showed

                 Gone

 

The love I starved for

                 Gone

 

The gorgeous blue eyes

                 Gone

 

My dreams

                 Gone

 

The car from the wreckage

                 Gone

 

Him

 

...gone...

Reviews

[MoonlitAngel]

Heartbroken, and amazingly detailed. The torture spoke in every word. Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading it. Keep writing... You're very talented.

--Blood

[ShadowHaze]

yup! This is her friend ShadowHaze. And I still think this is an AWESOME poem. perfect :)

--Haze/Sid

[Fallen Angel]

Its definately to the point..well written