The Darkness

Everyone has it.

The darkness is a place where nobody wants to be.
They don't get to choose.
The darkness chooses them.
It surges through their body.
All those people that do bad things,
Blame the darkness that has taken over.
The darkness will eat you from the inside out.
So stay away unless you have a strong enough light to help you through it.

Author's Note

How am i doing readers?

Reviews

[Isabelle Conrad]

i think you're doing great, Bren! Darkness is such an awesome and express-y topic to write on and this one is really, really good! Oh and I'd love to see you writing a story (I saw you've only written poems). BTW I just got some inspiration from this for one of my books.

[Brennon]

Thanks! I really appreciate it! Also, it's good that it gave you inspiration.

[Zoya]

Uh-huh, true! Darkness...Another good topic. Everyone has different perceptions for everything. This was yours, on darkness. For some, surprisingly, darkness is beautiful. Overall, a nice 'dark' piece. I enjoyed reading it!

[Angel of the devil]

this is amazing! i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)



you are doing amazing!

[Brennon]

Really!? Thanks!!

[Angel of the devil]

yes. Welcome!

[Brennon]

Yaaaaaaaaaaaaay!

[Angel of the devil]

*smiles* lol :)