An intro to this story I've been working on.

An intro to this story I've been working on.

A Chapter by Bri
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Just part of a story I've been working on for a while.

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My name is Morgan Smith. I have two sisters named Emma and Hannah. We ran away from home when I was sixteen so I could escape the draft. Emma was fourteen and Hannah was eleven. We set up a camp near San Fransisco and soon other kids joined us from across the country. Now Emma and I are stuck in the middle of it and we are in way over heads. Are little act of resistance has grown to remarkable preportions.


© 2011 Bri


Author's Note

Bri
Feel free to be brutal. I want feedback on the writing style. I want to hear if it's boring or interesting and if you would like to hear more. I would also like hear what you think the story is about based on this paragraph. Please comment! Thank you!

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Sounds good to me! Are you going to add some drama, or devastation to the story?

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Tags: dystopia, rebel, rebellion, teen, youth, runaway, resistance, kids


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