GOODNIGHT

as i lay down to dream i wish for the next sun rise to be an awakening from a deep slumber, oh how i miss that deep comfort far into the wraps of my comforter, you see that window tonight, all full of frost, tonight is a great night of dreams, far in the recesses of our minds, so will we remember this i think not, for this is only for the moment, we love these sparks in the night, bringing the warmth in the cold, dark, night, oh babe i will see you on the morrow, when the sun rises tomorrow i will see, i will breath, and walk this night again. so goodnight and take it easy, heres a kiss goodnight for all you ladies, and heres a tip of the hat for all the bros out there, but if the night gets lonely for any of you fine babes, give me a shout, goodnight.

Reviews

[Deviant Works]

A little goodnight charm.:) A wonderful poem, beautifully written.

[CompellingComposer]

Bravo! Very nice write(:

[Vannessa]

i love it! lol its awesome!

[Eternal.Dreamer]

I like the slow, kinda serious start and the witty - humorous - cute end. Good writing.

[Nicholas]

That's peaceful, I like the the part about the window... "all full of frost, tonight is a great night of dreams"... and about the dreams... that's a good line "so will we remember this i think not, for this is only for the moment, we love these sparks in the night"

[Marie Harrison]

very peaceful but fun write. put a smile on my face. made me sleepy too!

[Sean Allen]

Goodnight!

[alice]

This is very comforting in a snuggle-in-your-blanket-kind of comforting, followed by a very nice wake-up call (hopefully).

[Ashley]

haha its cute =]

[xlovehatealicex]

hahah.
quite humorous in the end. XD
i like the change of the tone in this one.