A Peaceful Storm

A Peaceful Storm

A Poem by Brianna Brie
"

Gentle love in the midst of a storm

"


A Peaceful Storm


Rain falls beyond the heavens

Drenching the earth with cleansing properties

To minister to the unforgiven.

Booming sounds of all authorities

Strikes of lightening pierce dark sky’s presence

Lord, may I ponder your qualities?


 

Everlasting from creation to completion,

Longsuffering a plea for humans, receive my love.


 

Gemstone kaleidoscope of rainbow hues, salvation

Gloriously positions in skies above

Gently forgiving after-rain soothes creation.

Tips of a white winged dove

Peacefully sanction the son’s blood relation

Pools of rainfall promise love.


Brianna Brie ~ August 25, 2016

© 2016 Brianna Brie


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Featured Review

Hi, Brianna!
It is just Richard, come calling and to warmly welcome you home. : )

From reading my simple little poem, "The River, the Clouds, and Us", you know I enjoy the unique flexibility and power of a Free Verse composition, and when one has been blessed with the skill, the genuine capacity to express emotion and feeling, as you have here, there is no doubt this enthralling work portrays God's glorious imagery from a heart and soul that is true and alive to it all.
A very moving and lovely introduction picture, too … the perfect mood-setter.

Stunning in imagery, beauty, and sheer wonderment, Brianna, you've touched me gently to the core!
Thank you for this embracing moment shared! ⁓ Richard

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brianna Brie

4 Years Ago

Thank you for the taking the time to read and respond. Even your reviews are eloquent, and I appreci.. read more
Richard 🍃

4 Years Ago

Some things are just good for us!



Reviews

[send message][befriend] Subscribe
pal
Wonderful poem. With ease flowing thoughts
Pal

Posted 10 Months Ago


I really enjoyed this work of art. Your command of free verse has always been something I admired. That hasn't changed. The title set the tone and the rest of the writing followed suit.

Posted 4 Years Ago


After years of time away, it is a delight to my heart to stumble back upon your writing. I truly enjoyed this piece of writing, from the imagery to the flow but that is something I've come to expect when I sit down to read your work. Hats off

Posted 4 Years Ago


Hi, Brianna!
It is just Richard, come calling and to warmly welcome you home. : )

From reading my simple little poem, "The River, the Clouds, and Us", you know I enjoy the unique flexibility and power of a Free Verse composition, and when one has been blessed with the skill, the genuine capacity to express emotion and feeling, as you have here, there is no doubt this enthralling work portrays God's glorious imagery from a heart and soul that is true and alive to it all.
A very moving and lovely introduction picture, too … the perfect mood-setter.

Stunning in imagery, beauty, and sheer wonderment, Brianna, you've touched me gently to the core!
Thank you for this embracing moment shared! ⁓ Richard

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brianna Brie

4 Years Ago

Thank you for the taking the time to read and respond. Even your reviews are eloquent, and I appreci.. read more
Richard 🍃

4 Years Ago

Some things are just good for us!
[send message][befriend] Subscribe
Gee
Not sure I fully understood this, but I enjoyed the read. It's nice to read other than that which I write which is simple rhyming bits, should really try to branch out but haven't got the best grasp of old Queenies English

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brianna Brie

4 Years Ago

Thank you for stopping by my page. :)
WoW!!!!
vivid........peace washes over the reader as well........
one might make faces and make a run for the nearest shelter........or.......just spread arms and reveive the divine shower of love......
beautiful!!!
i loved it!!!
:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brianna Brie

4 Years Ago

Thank you for taking the time to read me. Looking forward to reviewing you :)
Where have you been hiding hon... sure missed your heartfelt and compassionate words.
Such an uplifting poem. Absolutely love it.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brianna Brie

4 Years Ago

Hi Dale, it is a pleasure hearing from you again, too. Will stop by your page asap.
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

4 Years Ago

So good seeing you back in the cafe. Sure have missed ya.
Such a beautiful write! You've created amazing imagery and feeling one receives from seeing such beauty! Tyfs!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Brianna Brie

4 Years Ago

Thanks for reviewing. Heading over to your page :)
Cyprian Van Dyke

4 Years Ago

You're most welcome!
it's all there...nature cleansing itself, the significance of it related to those rainstorms we go through as individuals and how we can be reborn, get a fresh start...

j.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brianna Brie

4 Years Ago

Thanks for reading, Jacob :)
So atmospheric and visual. A wonderful description that goes beyond rain and a storm, but is compared to a love that is greater than us all.

I look forward to more of your work.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brianna Brie

4 Years Ago

Thank you, Alice. You have a cute pen name fun and flirty.

Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

556 Views
10 Reviews
Rating
Added on August 25, 2016
Last Updated on August 25, 2016
Tags: God, Lord, Jesus, love, mercy, rain, storm, salvation

Author

Brianna Brie
Brianna Brie

NJ



About
me in a nutshell...friends, family, living life to the fullest, writing, poetry, travel, reading, music, a spring day, sunshine, irises, love Life without love is like a tree without blossoms or.. more..


Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..