Falling back to you

High school love... and starting it again.

You dance around those three words

and i´ve got them on the tip of my tongue

you´re so damn pretty when you dont know what to say

 

just close your eyes and pretend i´m there

and that i´m not a million miles away

you are where i want to stay

and where i want to be when i come home

 

You and I sounds so good right now

i´ve got your name painted on my wrists

and i know that there´s a sky

lit up somewhere for us

we had a heart but we broke it

we had a chance but we messed it up

and now we´re back again

and i cant see myself without you

 

you´re always on my mind

like when you stole my first kiss in high school

i drove that whole school wild

singing songs that i wrote about you

 

and it´s got to be a wonder now

that i´ve got my pen dead set on you again

you´ve always been beautiful to write

and i´m not going to let this go, because

 

You and I sounds so good right now

i´ve got your name painted on my wrists

and i know that there´s a sky

lit up somewhere for us

we had a heart but we broke it

we had a chance but we messed it up

and now we´re back again

and i cant see myself without you

 

Author's Note

REVIEW! What´s good? What´s bad?

Reviews

[A Wanderer of Dreams]

The battles of a great love! It always leaves us to torn, worn, and wanting more. I loved the scene of you driving the school wild with your songs about her, and that there's a sky lit up for the two of you. The first brings it into a day-to-day perspective, the latter makes your relationship seem ethereal, extended, and divine. I could see this being turned into a song! Good stuff :)

[A. Lee]

This is lovely...your words are so kind and gentle. I love it. The emotions are well written. Excellent poem/song!

[PaperLife]

Everytime I read this it takes me to a place inside my heart so solemn, so broken. This is the kind of stuff you want to read and listen to over and over. The kind of stuff that makes you close your eyes and bleed to.

Your words sew together shattered days but leaves patches and defects in the picture. It's beautiful. You always write such amazing softening, things.

[Lilmissfit]

this is so sweet and so passionate. you can deffinatly feel the emotions blending and twisting in with the words you have written :) great write! :)

[Becca]

wow. it's amazing, makes me think of how i felt with my first love. i always find myself going back to that past part in my life. your poem is truly beautiful.

[Sophie]

I really liked this. I love the chorus, or the stanza that repeats if it's not a song, my favorite lines are, " i´ve got your name painted on my wrists
and i know that there´s a sky
lit up somewhere for us" Good write! Off to read more! :)

[dreaming dame]

:) Is this a song? I love it. I think the only thing near bad is the I's being not capitalized, but that hardly matters. This is so sweet. :)