Someone worth losing

Someone worth losing

A Poem by Bridger Hall
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sometimes you write the best when you´re mad

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You’re such a sad excuse for a good time

And I was blind enough to look past both your faces

You sink ships with every move that you make

Exaggerated clear cut and perfect for attention

 

I’m struggling to find the words to say to bring you down hard

Harder than you’ve ever fallen

I’m allergic to that tone of voice

And all those dirty faces mean nothing to me this time

 

Go back to New Jersey;

You know no one wants you here

And I’m so selfish yea it’s so clear

Everyone knows you’re wrong

And the world will sing this song

Until you see that you’re someone worth losing.

 

All this nervous pacing is worthless

And I’ll write it all out to better collect myself

There was a fine line between my heart and your head

And you just can’t seem to get around it

 

I feel so bad to keep writing like this

Tearing you down and sinking to your level

It’s good to get it off my chest

And it’s good to keep yours covered

That way no one will know what we’ve done

 

Go back to New Jersey;

You know no one wants you here

And I’m so selfish yea it’s so clear

Everyone knows you’re wrong

And the world will sing this song

Until you see that you’re someone worth losing

© 2012 Bridger Hall


Author's Note

Bridger Hall
I know it´s not perfect. i like a lot of the lines. tell me what you think?

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Nice job! This was very relatable...I can almost feel your anger when I read. My favorite line was "There was a fine line between my heart and your head".

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I really enjoyed this, found it quite wonderful really. Has a smooth flow. Awesome writing skills.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Love this! Some gorgeous lines in these lyrics, I hope you write more~

Posted 12 Years Ago


So you write songs! I was a little confused with the choruses and such, and the "yea"s and the few swears, but as a song I love these! It sounds like something I would totally listen to! Angry songs are fun, because they're full with emotion. Beautiful! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Bridger Hall
Bridger Hall

Preston, ID



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I am from Idaho. I love it. I don´t appear to be complicated... But i am in a constant war with myself. I am a member of the Church of Jesus Christ of Latter Day Saints. I will never deny it. I .. more..

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A Poem by Bridger Hall