Battles

Battles

A Poem by Brittany W

Workout workout workout


Eat less


No, this is too much


Fatfatfatfatfatfatfat


Workout workout workout


Maybe this meal can be cut


You’re just a fatty don’t add that


Workout workout workout


Im stuck here


Controlled by these thoughts


Workout workout workout


When is too much?


Ten more pounds sounds good


Workout workout workout


When will I be good enough?


When will I be happy with myself?


Workout workout workout


Im fat worthless piece of s**t


Workout workout workout


Im dying here,


Killing myself with these thoughts


Workout workout workout


I don’t care,


Skinny, skinny, skinny, is what I want


Workout workout workout


My body pleads for  me to stop


NO, never


Workout workout workout


Skinny skinny skinny


Fat fat fat


Workout workout workout


Please.. please, just let me be skinny


Workout workout workout


When is it enough?    


Cant I be happy?


Workout workout workout..


Never.

© 2011 Brittany W


Author's Note

Brittany W
My addiction.. enjoy.

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Sadly, this an incredibly accurate depiction of the thought process of many, many people in an image-obsessed society. I enjoyed the rapid, unrelenting pace as it ran parallel to the idea of obtaining an instantly perfect figure that is ultimately an endless cycle of self-destruction and self-hatred. Very awesome.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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this is amazing. i loved it and i know im not writing with proper grammar but im only writing a comment sooo....lol yea anyway this really hit home for me i used to be that way now i still want to be skinny and i struggle with these thoughts but i force myself to eat, im here if u need to talk =]

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is very well written! There are very strong messages here too.



Posted 10 Years Ago


Obsession. Inadequacy. This was lovely, dear. I do apologize I have not responded to your reading requests here, but I will be visiting this site more frequently. Take care.

Posted 10 Years Ago


absolutely wonderful

Posted 10 Years Ago


I agree with the other review. Unfortunately, this is the basic truth of what some (and many) Americans face daily when it comes to weight loss. People are so obsessed with the "perfect image" that they forget who they truly are at heart, by becoming lost in the world of today's technology and trends. I love this sad, unfortunate, yet honest, poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


i am so there great jon

Posted 10 Years Ago


hmmm.... maybe it's the wrong addiction? lol

as manic as aerobics.... I think you can take five now.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I certainly know how this one goes ;-) ...a nice write which physically embodies the emotional concept well.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Admonishing self talk adroitly presented. Good example of conflicted emotions savaging the being.

Posted 10 Years Ago


aww your skinny. dont have this addiction to be overlly thin. be healthy! 100

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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