Battles

Battles

A Poem by Brittany W

Workout workout workout


Eat less


No, this is too much


Fatfatfatfatfatfatfat


Workout workout workout


Maybe this meal can be cut


You’re just a fatty don’t add that


Workout workout workout


Im stuck here


Controlled by these thoughts


Workout workout workout


When is too much?


Ten more pounds sounds good


Workout workout workout


When will I be good enough?


When will I be happy with myself?


Workout workout workout


Im fat worthless piece of s**t


Workout workout workout


Im dying here,


Killing myself with these thoughts


Workout workout workout


I don’t care,


Skinny, skinny, skinny, is what I want


Workout workout workout


My body pleads for  me to stop


NO, never


Workout workout workout


Skinny skinny skinny


Fat fat fat


Workout workout workout


Please.. please, just let me be skinny


Workout workout workout


When is it enough?    


Cant I be happy?


Workout workout workout..


Never.

© 2011 Brittany W


Author's Note

Brittany W
My addiction.. enjoy.

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Sadly, this an incredibly accurate depiction of the thought process of many, many people in an image-obsessed society. I enjoyed the rapid, unrelenting pace as it ran parallel to the idea of obtaining an instantly perfect figure that is ultimately an endless cycle of self-destruction and self-hatred. Very awesome.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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This is a sad piece as well..because you are having internal struggle like everyone faces. I really think that everyone is going to feel like this because they want to fit in. This was a good piece. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I face this challenge and fight and seem to fail time and time again. Great poem. Keep on penning.

Posted 10 Years Ago


'when will i be good enough?' -such a great simple line.
great ending.
powerful poem


Posted 10 Years Ago


Sadly, this an incredibly accurate depiction of the thought process of many, many people in an image-obsessed society. I enjoyed the rapid, unrelenting pace as it ran parallel to the idea of obtaining an instantly perfect figure that is ultimately an endless cycle of self-destruction and self-hatred. Very awesome.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a cleverly formulated poem. I enjoyed reading this. Oh, those dreadful addictions of ours. You penned this well.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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