Heaven

Heaven

A Poem by Britaini Gross
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Just a little haiku

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I’m lost in the dark,

I can’t feel my heart beating,

This must be Heaven. 

© 2015 Britaini Gross


Author's Note

Britaini Gross
Just a literary doodle, haha.

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Huh. Very interesting. I clicked on this expecting an upbeat, happy little haiku, but that is not what I found. I'm kind of glad for that, actually, because this version is more thought provoking, more "down to earth" if you will. Thanks for the poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Britaini Gross

7 Years Ago

I am glad that you enjoyed it.
Flopp

7 Years Ago

Yet again ReadsAtDances, You amaze me with your "punny" references :)



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.......or it could be hell?

Posted 7 Months Ago


Haha! I was expecting it to be a deep thought provoking poem, but it turned out to be short and equally thought provoking! Was not expecting that :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Britaini Gross

7 Years Ago

Thank you.
Huh. Very interesting. I clicked on this expecting an upbeat, happy little haiku, but that is not what I found. I'm kind of glad for that, actually, because this version is more thought provoking, more "down to earth" if you will. Thanks for the poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Britaini Gross

7 Years Ago

I am glad that you enjoyed it.
Flopp

7 Years Ago

Yet again ReadsAtDances, You amaze me with your "punny" references :)

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Added on November 29, 2015
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Britaini Gross
Britaini Gross

Piedmont, SC



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I've always loved literature, even when I was too little to read my grandfather enlightened me with poems from around the world. Sylvia Plath is my favorite writer and my idol. I've never published an.. more..

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