(Fish Out Of Water)

(Fish Out Of Water)

A Poem by Brittany

 

 

 

 

your face is falling off in tones like

              

the deciduous mind you claimed

                         

to be the

      

    death of you

 

 

© 2011 Brittany


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Brittany
Everything is intentional.

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The line breaks are a bit off, but I can see the receiver having second thoughts. :)

Posted 7 Months Ago


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A very cryptic, but interesting poem. I'm not sure why, but I do like it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


It's good to see you back again. Yet another strong piece, even though it's short in content. The imagery is amazing, parts of this person just shedding off and falling gracefully to the ground. It's harrowing yet, at the same time, almost has a whimsical feel to it. You better be writing more now.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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