Society

So many voices screaming so loud in my head

Society people call you

Screaming so loud. So much. How could you push someone to this?

Lonley people choosing the blade because they feel no one around.

People stumbling around with empty bottles because it takes the place of the pain. but only for a moment.

Society!

What have you made people?

Take a step back

SEE WHAT YOU HAVE DONE!

More and more are gone each day.

Lost souls slowly slipping away.

Pushing people to these limits, just for a small compliment or to be called perfect.

What is the golden prize in that winning circle if it costs one of those kids fighting for the fame, to be in the GROUND?

Reviews

[Sujash I. Purna]

subtle satire...yet magnificently worked out! I'm awed by the lines...

Society!
What have you made people?

You sure are a talented writer who think things through...this poem bears the testimony :) Kudos!

[.Lost Soul.]

oh my goodness i do really like this, alot. so much emotion, nicley done ♥ keep writing, Emma ♥