Society

Society

A Poem by BrokenGirl

So many voices screaming so loud in my head

Society people call you

Screaming so loud. So much. How could you push someone to this?

Lonley people choosing the blade because they feel no one around.

People stumbling around with empty bottles because it takes the place of the pain. but only for a moment.

Society!

What have you made people?

Take a step back

SEE WHAT YOU HAVE DONE!

More and more are gone each day.

Lost souls slowly slipping away.

Pushing people to these limits, just for a small compliment or to be called perfect.

What is the golden prize in that winning circle if it costs one of those kids fighting for the fame, to be in the GROUND?

© 2011 BrokenGirl


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subtle satire...yet magnificently worked out! I'm awed by the lines...

Society!
What have you made people?

You sure are a talented writer who think things through...this poem bears the testimony :) Kudos!

Posted 9 Years Ago


oh my goodness i do really like this, alot. so much emotion, nicley done ♥ keep writing, Emma ♥

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on July 2, 2011
Last Updated on July 2, 2011
Tags: saddness, broken, pain, hurt, society, emo, depression, help

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BrokenGirl
BrokenGirl

Jefferson, AR



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I'm just me. A regular lost broken soul. Everyone says my writing is good so I thought I'd give it a shot here. See if anyone takes a liking to it. :] I'm very different more..

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