No Longer

No Longer

A Poem by Owl City
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someone saying no longer will they take the other persons crap.

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  I die inside.        You see me cry.                         You try to lie to me.                   All my pain is slowly killing me.                        But you don’t see what you’ve done to me.     I don’t want to live like this, slowly dying inside.        You hurt me but not abuse me.                        You kill my dreams, hopes, and all that I have left.       You used to be so sweet but now so bitter.                I miss the way you used to hold me and love me.   But now you hurt me inside.                              Why so bitter?       Why so mean?         Why don’t you love me any more?          We were so close, but now so far apart.                        I miss the calls from you saying I love you.               But now all I get from you is divorcement papers.    I miss you so, but all the love you gave me is truely now gone.     You killed me inside.                          You hurt me inside.   You see me cry and you try to lie but now I know you are not worthy.               I don’t miss the calls anymore for you are too bitter.     You can no longer kill my dreams, hopes, and all I have left.                                      I no longer miss you so, for I have learned I shouldn’t miss you.                                     I shall no longer shed a tear for you because I no longer need you.                  So now you know that I’m over the pain from you and I would never shed a tear again.  For you are no longer worthy to me.                              ~Brooke~                            
 

© 2009 Owl City


Author's Note

Owl City
hope u like it.



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I love it!!! My friend is going thorugh that and I feel so bad 4 HIM!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It was beautiful!!!!!!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!


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Posted 13 Years Ago


That was really good, and deep. I like how parts from the begining repeted in the end, when I need for that person was no longer there. Although I'm sorry if you had to go through anything like that. the Poem was good, great succsess. I loved the signature at the end, expetially since I have the same name. :)

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Posted 13 Years Ago


So hmmm... who could she be talking to? Could be someone who broke her heart but could it also be her own negative attitude maybe? Or a parental figure who refuses to build her up?
Tell me... what does the poet say?
Nice work...

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Posted 13 Years Ago



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