The Leader

The Leader

A Poem by Don Shaw
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Beware of wolves in sheep clothing.

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                                 The Leader
          
                     A Leader ran for office , ohhhhh the promises that he made.
                     and after he was elected , his promises began to fade.
                     A Leader ran for office , the change he made us feel.
                     and after he was elected , his change became surreal.
                     A Leader ran for office , no secrets was his wish.
                     and after he was elected , the truth was sorely missed.
                     A Leader ran for office , questions would surely rise.
                     and after he was elected , we soon knew our demise.
                     A Leader ran for office , police state a secret goal.
                     and after he was elected , freedom is what he stole.
                     A Leader ran for office, mysterious was his past.
                     and after he was elected , the mysteries were large and vast.
                     A Leader ran for a second term, public opinion will be no fear.
                     So here we stand America , the same as a corn fed deer.

© 2012 Don Shaw


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Great interplay between the before and after, switching back and forth each couplet. And I especially like the change of pace in the last couplet - it really highlights it to help make your point. I'm sure you did that purposely - just wanted to let you know it didn't go unappreciated ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Don Shaw

11 Years Ago

lol glad you saw that, thanks
The interweaving of prose and politic is truly genius in this piece. I loved every line of it; especially the "corn fed deer" one. This has insight into the truth of our great decision in November that shines out the importance to cast one's vote. Nice work here; truly inspiring.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Don Shaw

11 Years Ago

Thanks Chris
love the political issue you are brushing on we are from completely opposite sides of the world but corruption is a universal issue

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Don Shaw
Don Shaw

San Angelo, TX



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