Set Me Free

Set Me Free

A Poem by Don Shaw
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Living in His will ,comes with a price !

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              Set Me Free

                           Walking in His will can be times of a , silent fate
                           Feeling the pain of a an echoed gait .
                           Oh doing  His work on a silent road.
                           Waiting for the harvest of the seeds I`d sowed.
 
                           Set me free Father,
                           oh set me free.
                           Set me free Father,
                           oh set me free.
                           Set me free Father,
                           oh set me free.
                           Set me free Father,
                           oh please set me free Father, of what i know as ME.

                          Oh a empty heart,and an aching  soul.
                          The peeling away of HIS truth untold.
                          Screaming out into the heavenly skies.
                          For believing all of the enemies  lies.

                          Set me free Father,
                          oh set me free.
                          Set me free Father,
                          oh set me free.
                          Set me free Father,
                          oh set me free.
                          Set me free Father,
                          oh please set me free Father, of what i know as ME.

                          He covered me with His loving grace,
                          and His heart felt love.
                          It descended down upon me,
                          from heaven above.
                          My chains have been broken.
                          I am shackled no more.
                          Freedom from the Father,
                          and His love i adore.
                       
                          Thank you for the peace,
                          Father.
                          Thank you for the peace,
                          Father.
                          Thank you for the peace,
                          Father.
                          Once i surrendered the LIE, to You,
                          my pain began to cease,
                          my pain began to cease.
                       

© 2016 Don Shaw


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amen. This is a great stand alone poem but I would love to hear it sung. So many great poets take their gift and give it out to the wider audience - craving that validation but when i read a great poet who is giving that gift back to the Giver of All Great Gifts, it gives me hope. Well penned.

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Don Shaw

6 Years Ago

Thank you.



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A song like poem; with lyrics that sing off the page. A triumph x

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Don Shaw

6 Years Ago

Thank you for the kind review
From forgiveness comes love. Well said.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a sweet song,
pleading with the Lord to set us free from our wrongs.

This is very touching...

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beautiful composition and arrangement of words. powerful repetition. it is raw and honest

Posted 6 Years Ago


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oh please set me free Father, of what i know as ME.
.
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Thank you for the peace,
Father.
Once i surrendered my life to You,
my pain began to cease

a wonderful prayer, freeing oneself of all false vanity and having belief in Almighty and getting peace.
written nicely, liked it a lot.


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Don Shaw

6 Years Ago

Thank you.
Prritiy

6 Years Ago

welcome...
amen. This is a great stand alone poem but I would love to hear it sung. So many great poets take their gift and give it out to the wider audience - craving that validation but when i read a great poet who is giving that gift back to the Giver of All Great Gifts, it gives me hope. Well penned.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Don Shaw

6 Years Ago

Thank you.
Don, what else can I say about the amazing lyrics? So inspiring..full of faith. This is the piece that lifts those who fell down and broken.

Nice choice of words. Excellent concept.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Don Shaw

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much.
The love of God is an amazing thing. Addiction is a hard battle to overcome and we lose ourselves and become something less appealing when the monster rears its ugly head.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Don Shaw

7 Years Ago

so true dr jeckle and mr hyde
A beautiful heartwarming piece Don...Rose

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Don Shaw

7 Years Ago

thanks Rose
Oh Rita. This is a beautiful write, so lyrical as the words resonate through my heart. It's a beautiful song recited aloud. Deep expression of emotion of faith and trust in The Lord. A plea expressed powerfully with thanksgiving. Excellent closing. Well penned. Thank you for sharing. Write on!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ShelleyA

7 Years Ago

Thank you for sending it to me. It was a nice opening to my day.
Don Shaw

7 Years Ago

thank y`all
ShelleyA

7 Years Ago

You're welcome.

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Don Shaw
Don Shaw

San Angelo, TX



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