Hmmmmmmm

The human mind is one of the last frontiers.Its limits are often self imposed. When free its beautiful.

        Hmmmmmmmmm
              
                      Loops and ladders that run through a mind,
                      creating thoughts of a very unique kind.
                      Far out ideas with a conservative restraint,
                      like an artist filled brush of poke a dot paint.
                      A song or invention, all start with a thought,
                      it`s also the place criminals are caught.
                      Life saving medicine or a murderous plot,
                      if it`s not used its subject to rot.
                      Loops and ladders that run through a mind,
                      creating thoughts of a very unique kind.
                      A book, a story, a poem or two,
                      if really thought about, its where we first tied a shoe.
                      Van Gogh`s Starry Night, the Wright brothers flight,
                      it`s the place in our brain that sorts out the sight.
                      Each is original as the print on a hand,
                      some can be followed as a track in the sand.
                      Loops and ladders that run through a mind,
                      creating thoughts of a very unique kind.

Reviews

[LinBin]

wonderful use of rhyme, this piece reads like a song that I would enjoy playing x

[Amanda Buscemi]

Beautiful, lyrical.< Proofing stuff: "it's" and "original">

[Viper]

nice flow.....well thought out.

[Science girl]

Great piece! It has always amazed me how our minds are full of endless amounts of ideas and you described that perfectly.

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Quite the poetic write here.
Love the flow and rhyme scheme.