An Archer

    She was called The Raven because of her dark black hair and the ravens that stayed near her. The Raven was an archer. She held her great bow in front of her while her hand grabbed an arrow from her the holder on her back. Her jaw was set and her eyes squinted at her target. The Raven put the arrow into the bow and pulled the string back. She kept her back straight, her elbow up, and she let the arrow rest on the top of her hand. Her arrow was released. It flew across the field to the man. He stared in awe at the woman confidently watching her arrow. His look turned grave as the arrow drove itself deep in his chest. The Raven still kept her jaw set and showed no emotion. Another arrow was released at another man and she didn't stop until the men no longer came. The battle came to an end so she held the bow against her side. The Raven stared out across the field with a cold heart. Bodies were scattered everywhere and not one of them made it close to her. "She is as unstoppable as death," people all over the world would say, "The ravens themselves represent death." These rumors were spread everywhere nor did they ever stop. This archer was called not only the Raven but also Death's helper.

Author's Note

What do you think??? Enough description? :) It was kind of fun to write but I had to really look in detail at an archer... I hope you enjoyed it!

Reviews

[amdc101]

I loved it. Really good!! :)

P.S. The holder is called a quiver!

[Hunter C. Brown]

great story, but one thing the "holder" on her back was actually a quiver. no need to change it just saying. also love the story itself, like i do for all your works. keep on writing!!! ;P

[Daytonight]

Very well done. I am enjoying these stories.

[Niki Wilson]

good! well done!

[TheElfPrincess]

A very good story, I liked it. There was lots of description but you didn't make it boring. Well done.