Murderer

Murderer

A Story by BrynnaW.

     The evidence was hidden, the body was buried, and everything went on as if nothing had happened. There was no record of the murder, no fingerprints to prove it, and no witnesses... That were alive, at least. I was the murderer. Of course, all of this would be a good thing for me but for others... It just led to misfortune. So badly, I wanted out of the business but it was a do or die sort of thing. I was born into the business, bred into it. Really, I've known no other way. My first murder was held on my fifth birthday. I was trained so well that when I killed the innocent, I walked away without a care in the world. The blood lust was shone brightly in my eyes. I killed the man cleanly with a small dagger which I keep to this day. My last murder was last week in the center of a crowd. It was in a city and I was up high on a building. I trained my sniper scope on the woman's head and pulled back the trigger. She fell to the ground with blood poring out of the wound. The crowd freaked and ran every which way. Around me, my partners opened fire with their machine guns. As the last bullet was shot, I noticed all of the bodies we would have to clean up. That day, I ran away from the business. Now, my past partners are after me by commands from the boss. It has been a week and I am still on the run. I have dodged bullets, hid myself away, and I nearly escaped death. Still, I am on the run.

© 2011 BrynnaW.


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It definitely kept me reading, it was just what one of the things I was looking for I thought it had a great plot, I found the twist I was after and even now I am anxious too know what will happen to him (or her) you've certainly sparked my imagination. =)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Intense, this pulled me in and it was a lot of fun to read. Nice job

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Scary but so action like I can picture it rite now.By the way this is Pink rockstar

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That is almost frighting but at the same time it is freaking amazing

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

There's some potential here. It could be an interesting stand-point and idea but unfortunately the technical side lets it down. The descriptions and grammar need polish to make this a much easier to read and stronger piece.

Posted 9 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow! This is really scary and amazing at the same time!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Scary! your a great writer! Great! :-)
~ClaraQuinn:)
PS. It's one of the popular writing :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

it was really good. Loved it. its dark and slightly depressing but its still really good.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This dark story is very well written. My favorite line was :

There was no record of the murder, no fingerprints to prove it, and no witnesses... That were alive, at least.

Keep up the great work!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dark and depressing, yet still a beautiful piece of writing. Well done, I enjoyed it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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