Beginning of Our Fault

Beginning of Our Fault

A Poem by Bud

When is it that we come to know the difference between good and evil?
I suppose the question to ask is, where is the point we cross the threshold of good and evil in our youth?
And, likewise, I suppose that will be the very moment we find the beginning of our fault…
But is it our fault, or the fault of generations long before our very own existence?
For the answers to some questions are hidden deep before our very eyes,
And many answers turn out to be well planned and disguised lies…

© 2012 Bud


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This is good. It's like the ocean: at first glance it seems to have only the surface. But a closer look reveals that there is more beneath the surface to explore.
I definitely think that you should enter this in my poetry contest, Ocean Deep Poetry.
Keep up the great and epic work!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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this is so good, and is truthful

Posted 1 Year Ago


Truth is never as exciting as fiction. Or maybe it is the other way around. These are very well expressed thoughts here. Very wise.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is good. It's like the ocean: at first glance it seems to have only the surface. But a closer look reveals that there is more beneath the surface to explore.
I definitely think that you should enter this in my poetry contest, Ocean Deep Poetry.
Keep up the great and epic work!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very interesting concept and I enjoyed the way you wrote this. Short, but still gripping, and lovely end also.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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