Mascara Tears.

Mascara Tears.

A Poem by Bullet Soul
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There is no beauty in perfection.

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Her fingers dig, into my skin

Her face a mess, of mascara

 

She longs to be beautiful, a picture of perfection

With bright red lips, that charm every heart

 

This morning she spent, hours by the mirror

To please the one, who’d love her any way

 

She thinks I don’t see, the pain that she hides

Behind her deceiving, hazel eyes

 

But I’ve seen the wounds, that puncture her wrists

As she holds me close, to win my love

 

This girl is a stranger, with a painted fantasy

Of the girl she thinks, that she should be

 

I pull away, her clinging hands

And step away, from her side

 

Rejection’s tears, flood down her cheeks

As her cover starts to slip, and emotions start to show

 

Love swells through my heart, as she pulls off her mask

As I watch a black river, stream from her eyes

 

You are perfect, just the way you are

The girl I love, is beneath the surface, of her beauty

 

With eyes as bright, as morning’s sunrise

She plants her flowers, inside my heart

 

Wash off your mask, and change your clothes

For true beauty shines, from the heart that beats within

© 2009 Bullet Soul


Author's Note

Bullet Soul
Not my best, not my worst (hopefully not?!?)

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Beautiful piece. You've tackled some deep issues in this one. I found it interesting how she used the motivation of impressing someone she loved as an excuse to put on a mask. I loved how this person could see through it all to the real her, and encourage her to be herself instead of getting caught up in vanity and enabling her. I also really like how you took a very sad moment and turned it into a smile on our faces. Only a great writer can use their vision to get the reader to see a situation in a different light.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is awesome:) great poem

Posted 14 Years Ago


wow i really like this ..... i agree with u

Posted 14 Years Ago


Oh honey, this is beautiful! Pang - the arrow hits the heart. This is a winner!
Great write. I even love the title!

Posted 14 Years Ago


this is really good i love the word flow its really just great :D

Posted 14 Years Ago



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