Reality Escape

    

Wash away this time,

From the corners of my memories,

Seeping into the resonance of my soul.

Cleanse away this instance of reincarnated fears,

Immensed in delusions of escaping the prison,

Of my mind’s eye.

Pain and love, intertwined not mingling,

drains the life source,

rushing and gushing, 

through my veins.

Stolen visions encase the lumen of my heart,

embracing hallucinations of sweet, ever bitter memoirs,

reluctant to escape this false reality.

Restlessly, breathlessly seeping into nothingness

of tears surrounding my drowning heart, 

till its core is engulfed by the numbness of its,

bitterness.

Author's Note

Very much still editing!!

Reviews

[Sir Joe]

Poetry really is amazing. It never fails to serve as our medium to release or express unbridled emotions. You poured a lot of emotions in this poem. (=
And I felt that emotion. Like coyote, this is also my favorite stanza:
Pain and love, intertwined not mingling,
drains the life source,
rushing and gushing,
through my veins.

It showed how loving someone could be hurtful rather than fulfilling.
I just hope that the pain depicted in this poem is no longer in your heart. (=
Nice work, Buniheart. (=

[Buniheart]

Aww thanks again for reviewing.
I feel writing this poem, like many others, are created whenever
something from the past stirs up in me,
and writing poems like is what has helped freed me essentially.
Thanks for reviewing!

[Sir Joe]

Not at all. Keep sharing your good works. (=

[Rocans]

Good poem. What I like most is your choice of words to conjure up images and emotions. Good write

[luviva]

lots of "nesses", i got tripped on them but other than that, great write my friend

[外人 (Gaiji..]

ok, so starting from the theme:
I've just stopped reading a book called "the encyclopedia of magical creatures" so i'm kinda into fantasy, immagination and this kind of stuff right now xD (even though more than going into a fantasy world, as the title says, your poem describe the wish of escaping from the real one). Your poem is full of pathos, you managed to fill it with it perfectly thanks to the numerous antithesis you've put :). To catch the essence of your work completely, i should be reading it for hours, since i don't have this time i stopped after a couple of readings and well, it's very cool =D Great work, keep writing these amazing poems =D

[David Kwaku]

I like the way in which you capture the image of your emotions into words. Great poem

[Coyote Poetry]

"Pain and love, intertwined not mingling,
drains the life source,
rushing and gushing,
through my veins."
You did a excellent job with this poem. Powerful thoughts brought me in and the poem got stronger with each line. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote