Validate Me

Validate Me

A Poem by BJ "Bunneh3000" Brown

doubt insecurity and fear all rolled up into one powerful emotion


It's much deeper than words...


See me and say it

Not just what's real

but what is real good


Did I say good?

I meant great


Why? Because I need it

Did I say I?

I meant you


It is there that I become

There that you prove to me

who I am

that you care


Not once

But everytime I see you

everytime you see me

'cause I can't fly

if your wind stops blowing

if my presence stops showing

you that I am


that I am

where I am

who I am


who am I??

© 2013 BJ "Bunneh3000" Brown

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Beautiful piece.. I love the play with words.

Posted 6 Years Ago

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Added on August 27, 2013
Last Updated on October 1, 2013
Tags: fear, doubt


BJ "Bunneh3000" Brown
BJ "Bunneh3000" Brown


Engineer by day, passionate poet during all points in between... Sex, love, music, life, movies, and my loving wife Adrianne inspire my moments of poetic bliss. Hoping to improve my writing a.. more..