Summer Song

Summer Song

A Poem by Sbernie18

Blame it on the entrance,

Yeah, you know she made it,

 Cause she’s always smiling at you.


Blame it on the music,

Yeah, the rhythm’s blinding,

But she’s only dancing with you.


Fight to be the one that,

Holds her up and shows her,

What there is yet to do.


Gently start all over,

Quiet beneath the summer,

There is so much left for you.


© 2011 Sbernie18

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this flows beautifully, like that soft summer breeze.

Posted 10 Years Ago

I like this writing nice job (:

Posted 10 Years Ago

wonderfull poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago

You write very well. I do not find much fault with your writing. I like it very much, instead.

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Posted 10 Years Ago

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Real nice. Got a good beat to it. I liked it

Posted 10 Years Ago

Very pretty. Nice write.

Posted 10 Years Ago

This was very sweet indeed. Competing to be the one who cherishes her heart with one dance...magnificent.

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Added on August 11, 2011
Last Updated on August 11, 2011



Syracuse, NY

Hey, I'm from Syracuse. I write poetry, lyrics, a few short stories and longer stuff. I try to be as active as possible and review what I can. I love reading new poems and stories everyday so send me .. more..

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