Don't Hide

When nothing you know is true,

And all the faces you see are new.

When all but nothing seems to break,

You take a turn to ride your wake.

 

When nothing else becomes a lie,

You take a hit and start to fly.

You feel no pain to recreate,

What you took to feel so great.

 

When everyone else seems to move,

And you look around to disapprove.

You seem so quick to just restart.

You try so hard to stay apart.

 

Why look past when all else fails,

Why put off what just prevails.

Don’t try too hard to look away,

The girl you know you want to stay.

Reviews

[Mehul Rwat]

A very well written poem. I must say this kind of poem needs a lot of twisting and it takes a lot of energy to make the sentences rhyme. I myself take a lot of time to do that in my poems. You really are a good writer. Keep honing your skills.

[amdc101]

Nice theme, nice flow...I'm just going to repeat what other people said, because it really is just a great poem!

[Dahlia Phoenix]

This truly has a good flow. Nice job!

[EMF]

Good poem. Well themed and structured, with a good flow. Nice work