Just You

I dream of you
even when I’m awake.
Any tears I shed
be they happy or sad
will be collected by you.

You,
you dominate my heart.
My every action
is reaction to you.
Do you even know that
my life is yours for the taking?
My will is yours,
my soul, even.

Yet,
I sit alone
in this dark void.
You are the sun that
allows my shadow.

Reviews

[J.Sin]

When I read this I feel both the happiness of having and the sorrow of longing. I especially like the final two lines... "You are the sun that
allows my shadow." Such beauty in that statement, a beauty that I believe anyone being loved by you would be honoured to have said about them.

All in all, a lovely poem. Bravo! :)

[Becca H]

Thank you so much! Love is such a broad piece for me, I like to explore all of my experiences.