Heaven

Written while I was temporary hospitalized.

Moments....

Beauty in the form of emotion.

Kisses on the lips of butterflies,

Making your heart flutter with delight.

 

In the eyes of love,

Temptation soars above cloud nine.

Lost in translation,

Don't wake me from this dream.

 

Moments...

Lost in the eyes of another.

Heaven is no longer just a place,

In the skies of a neverending universe.

 

Time freezes, gone unnoticed

In a powerful embrace of love and life.

Moments of heaven

That should never be taken for granted.

Author's Note

Heaven doesnt have to be a place, it can be in the eyes anf embrace of a loved one (family or other). Live for each moment, and never take any moment in life for granted.

Reviews

[MandaBear]

Amazing!

[Renée]

Beautiful work Butterfly ! and so true !

[luna11]

Such a beautiful poem... I love the message.. savour each moment...

[Tarry Franck]

In the eyes of love,
Temptation soars above cloud nine.
Lost in translation,
Don't wake me from this dream.

Great job - Love this stanza but also the whole poem!! :)

[Angelove]

Your writing is very good but this pome didn't appel that interesting to me. I don't mean to sound harsh...

[Aella.lives]

I love your idea of heaven in this piece... Moments... Wonderful write. :)

[TPK Stories]

Such a beautiful write...of what heaven must be like...

[MOON]

Beautiful write and true heaven on earth is not merely an expression. Life is precious.

[Raven Starhawk]

I think pretty much everyone took the words out of my mouth, but I will say it anyway...this was angelically delightful.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Pure beauty, and heart felt!