#1 Crush

#1 Crush

A Poem by *~*Butterfly Kisses*~*

A twisted look at being obsessed with a crush. Partially inspired by Garbage's #1 Crush.


Dreaming once again --almost helpless,

I hold close the bittersweet image.

Your tender and devilish smile,

Locked tightly within my memory.


I have watched you closely,

Stalking you within the dark shadows

Waiting for the chance to grab your heart

An oppurtunity to make you mine.


Hypnotized, the master of my heart

Violation of my love I've been yearning

Pushing me away with every intention

To bring me back into your twisted embrace.


I have become an open book to you,

Unable to resist your jaded gaze

And give up my broken tattered soul

Sell it to the Devil just to have you near.


I can feel deep within my soul,

As I try to convince you - we are the same.

Free falling into your perverted games

Fingering the crevice of my thoughts.


Willing to die under your spell,

Tearing apart everything that's left of me.

One day you will finally understand, my love

You will always be my number one.









© 2012 *~*Butterfly Kisses*~*

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The poem flowed flawlessly, and it leaves me in awe.

Posted 7 Years Ago

I really adore your pieces. Love that 4th stanza.

Posted 7 Years Ago

beautiful!..i just love this one...
your great!..really.

Posted 7 Years Ago

Woah crush is just a sweet thing I thought... yeah that sounds more like obsession !

Posted 7 Years Ago

I suppose we all get this way sometimes or deny it even though it is totally true. Great job love the imagery! 100%

Posted 7 Years Ago

truly excellent......especially this line;;;;;;;And give up my broken tattered soul Sell it to the Devil just to have you near.

Posted 7 Years Ago

This is pretty good, some good use of imagery.Well written and well expressed. A good read :)

Posted 7 Years Ago

"Free falling into your perverted games
Fingering the crevice of my thoughts."

Wow.. seems lame but you blow me away with your excellent word play. I need to read you alot more often so kick me now and again when I get lame lol..xo Excellent write..xo

Posted 7 Years Ago

*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*

7 Years Ago

Thank you lily :)
I agree with Jasmine - this rings true for me !!! Great write - thank you for sharing - it's like we are experiencing the same! Thanks for sharing :)

Posted 7 Years Ago

Could sense this powerful, unyielding yearning... the longing to embrace even death for the desire... How I have let myself be submersed into such a sensual spell... the aching is overwhelming... You confess it so well...

Posted 7 Years Ago

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Added on October 4, 2012
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*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*
*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*

Somewhere between TN and NYC, TN

My name is Anna Rose... what can I say about myself? I'm 20 learning to live on my own, trying to escape from a dark part of my life. Been writing my heart since I was able to write. I write whate.. more..


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