Sounds of Winter

Sounds of Winter

A Poem by *~*Butterfly Kisses*~*

 

Milford Sound in New Zealand

 

Bitter cold nostalgia

Keeps me awake - I need this memory to fade.

So like the frost that bites at the skin,

Forever my bruised heart is broken.

 

There was no light in your blue eyes,

When the fires of desire that warmed us

Burned the colors of my world into ashes

Remains of black and grey.

 

I write away the pain you've caused,

As I revel in the sounds of winter.

The brutal silence that came from your lips,

Frozen within my thoughts.

 

© 2012 *~*Butterfly Kisses*~*


Author's Note

*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*
Winter by ~WielkiBoo

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Forever my heart be broken ..

This is one of your best .. very well done .. I love it ..

For me, blue eyes always lied, and still left me wanting more ..

Jazz

Posted 7 Years Ago


Excellence.

The only thing I would change is to remove "bruised" from the 4th line so that it becomes:
"Forever my heart is broken."

Posted 7 Years Ago


cleverly descriptive and honest

Posted 7 Years Ago


Remember, each winter will have his summer. Exquisite write, strings a chord in every heart.

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is profound!...it is a vivid expression of your broken heart. To be frozen, void of love..with silence to remain, is brutal. Excellent write dear poetess!...You always amaze me!

"Bitter cold nostalgia

Keeps me awake - I need this memory to fade.

So like the frost that bites at the skin,

Forever my bruised heart is broken."




Posted 7 Years Ago


*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*

7 Years Ago

Thank you, Robbie. :)

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Tags: frozen, depression, winter, heartache

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*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*
*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*

Somewhere between TN and NYC, TN



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My name is Anna Rose... what can I say about myself? I'm 20 learning to live on my own, trying to escape from a dark part of my life. Been writing my heart since I was able to write. I write whate.. more..

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