Fireburst

Fireburst

A Poem by *~*Butterfly Kisses*~*
"

Been some time since I wrote anything remotely erotic. Wrote this by candlelight. A Senryu.

"

 

Milford Sound in New Zealand

Fires of passion

Burst upon heavenly stars

Set my heart aflame.

© 2012 *~*Butterfly Kisses*~*


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*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*
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Beautiful! Shows the depth of passion...the universal quality, all consuming xoxo

Posted 11 Years Ago


A strong use of words. Create a powerful poem. Artwork gave life to your words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


Short and sweet... nicely done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


says it all in so few words

Posted 11 Years Ago


SOUNDS RIGHT .. I'VE KNOW IT WELL ...


HOT . JAZZY

Posted 11 Years Ago


Leaves me wanting more, but I suppose that's the expected result of good Senryu.
I wouldn't change a thing.
Reading it make me want to light a few candles myself :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Short but a piece that surely will have readers loving it, perhaps feeling it. I love how you put it in huge red letters too. It gave it more power in my opinion, but most of I like the poem itself.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*
*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*

Somewhere between TN and NYC, TN



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My name is Anna Rose... what can I say about myself? I'm 20 learning to live on my own, trying to escape from a dark part of my life. Been writing my heart since I was able to write. I write whate.. more..

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