Fireburst

Fireburst

A Poem by *~*Butterfly Kisses*~*
"

Been some time since I wrote anything remotely erotic. Wrote this by candlelight. A Senryu.

"

 

Milford Sound in New Zealand

Fires of passion

Burst upon heavenly stars

Set my heart aflame.

© 2012 *~*Butterfly Kisses*~*


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*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*
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Beautiful! Shows the depth of passion...the universal quality, all consuming xoxo

Posted 7 Years Ago


A strong use of words. Create a powerful poem. Artwork gave life to your words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


Short and sweet... nicely done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


says it all in so few words

Posted 7 Years Ago


SOUNDS RIGHT .. I'VE KNOW IT WELL ...


HOT . JAZZY

Posted 7 Years Ago


Leaves me wanting more, but I suppose that's the expected result of good Senryu.
I wouldn't change a thing.
Reading it make me want to light a few candles myself :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Short but a piece that surely will have readers loving it, perhaps feeling it. I love how you put it in huge red letters too. It gave it more power in my opinion, but most of I like the poem itself.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*
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My name is Anna Rose... what can I say about myself? I'm 20 learning to live on my own, trying to escape from a dark part of my life. Been writing my heart since I was able to write. I write whate.. more..

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