California Dreaming

California Dreaming

A Poem by *~*Butterfly Kisses*~*

Almost forgotten memories of love.


I remember the days we spent

On some other distant world

Purple and pink clouds

Floating beyond boats

Just over the horizons.


Our feet welded in the pearlish sand

As our hearts beat to every wave

Crashing amongst the shore

Those days, when we were in love.


I've spent my last few days

Lost in our memories we've made

Trapped inside a bottle

Now floating to some place unknown

With our bittersweet "I love you's"

Echoing inside my mind.


The palm trees even bowed

Like in a strong wind

As I got lost in the agony and extasy

Of your soft hands moving all over me.


My thoughts of you are screaming

Like the gulls flying in the breeze

As I dream of our days spent

On sandy California shores.


You will forever hold the key
To my heart, now yearning for you

Your memory, locked in a treasure box

I will forever hold these memories

Of you.




© 2011 *~*Butterfly Kisses*~*

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A marverlous tribute to someone who impacts your life with joy and love. All of the usual elements are here in this piece, so it doesn't disappoint. I loved this one.

Posted 12 Years Ago

I surrender to the sweetness, lovely write:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Posted 12 Years Ago

Beautiful poetic recollections you illustrated for your readers, thank you for sharing it with us all.

Posted 12 Years Ago

A nice passionate poem. I liked the desire, wish in this poem. An adorable poem. I liked it.

Posted 12 Years Ago

I could really the depth within this write, such a sadness but yet beauty, and thanx for your precious review, ♥

Posted 12 Years Ago

you have managed to make sorrow beautiful

Posted 12 Years Ago

such beautiful sorrow.....sweet sadness. this is the way of love. I enjoyed this piece. thank you for sharing!

Posted 12 Years Ago

I can open my eyes to a dream such as this. You penned the dream marvelously.

Posted 12 Years Ago

Sweet words of remembered love .. This California girl can relate .... Jasmine

Posted 12 Years Ago

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Added on October 15, 2011
Last Updated on October 15, 2011


*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*
*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*

Somewhere between TN and NYC, TN

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