Written In The Stars

Written In The Stars

A Poem by *~*Butterfly Kisses*~*

I have been reminsicing in the nights,

Memories of you and I

Where we danced along the lake

'Neath a moonlit diamond sky.

 

You sprinkled me in roses

And kisses with 'I love you's"

Burying candles in the sand

As they glowed for you and I.

 

We waltzed to our own love song

Even the leaves on the trees swayed

To the music in the soft gentle

Breezes of that beautiful night.

 

Romance was in the air,

And our love was written within

The stars as they shined brightly for us

You convinced me, this love is eternal.

© 2011 *~*Butterfly Kisses*~*


Author's Note

*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*
To awnser the questions behind the reason for this being in past tense: The relationship ended sadly.

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a sweet reminiscence. With everything but the final verb in the past tense, it could be the story of the start of a current relationship, or the hopeful beginning of a relationship that has since ended. I think the slight ambiguity broadens the appeal.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Sweetly seductive and touching on all levels. Amazing.

Posted 11 Years Ago



Another exquisite melody of what should sound cliche, but doesn't from your mouth! How do you do it Anna Rose? The stars, they are on your side.

Posted 12 Years Ago


A wonderful poem about love cherished and missed. The flow was like mercury in one's hand and I loved the imagery as well; especially the candles burning in the sand. Good poem. please keep it up.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow, sweet and romantic:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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sweet memories ...lovely phrasing..

Posted 12 Years Ago


Thank you for the beautiful poem of love. Even a distance love allow us to know we have touched paradise for a moment. I wouldn't want to lose one memory of the sweet hello's and the too many goodbyes. I like the last lines.
"The stars as they shined brightly for us
You convinced me, this love is eternal."
Thank you for the amazing poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


i am sorry to hear such an amazing and true romance has ended, but at least you were lucky enough to experience these feelings.....and we are lucky enough to relive them with you! great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


very nice romantic peom, i rather enjoyed this! good work, however it makes me wonder... what happened to make it past tense?

Posted 12 Years Ago


i loved the poem, you might not believe it but that's really my idea of a perfect date :) i wrote a poem a long time back called Moonlight read through it, you'll find a lot of parallels in imagery in my work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice romantic poem. I liked it. Great write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*
*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*

Somewhere between TN and NYC, TN



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My name is Anna Rose... what can I say about myself? I'm 20 learning to live on my own, trying to escape from a dark part of my life. Been writing my heart since I was able to write. I write whate.. more..

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