Digging My Own Grave

Digging My Own Grave

A Poem by *~*Butterfly Kisses*~*
"

Get out of my brain!

"

Small stones of concrete

Lives lost and some forgotten

In the darkened airy mist

Graveyard of past memories.

 

The perfect place,

The perfect spot

Pieces of me

Six feet beneath the ground.

 

Creatures of the night

Maggots and flies gnawing

At the tiny remains

Of my agonizing existence.

 

Hatred for the wrong

Liars and thieves

Taking everything, stealing

The innocence I once felt.

 

Swollen and tired hands,

I have worked too hard and long

Shooing away the flies

To forget these broken memories.

 

As I dig my own grave tonight

Broken memories will go forgotten

Stuffed within this coffin

Mourning the innocence you stole.

 

I will force myself to forget

The hatred that boils in my veins

Here lies my aching heart

Dead on the inside, its your fault.

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2011 *~*Butterfly Kisses*~*


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'here lies my aching heart dead on the inside, its your fault'
wow, this is an excellent poem, really great:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


you are so good!!
..nice..good job!..keep it up!

Posted 7 Years Ago


You have a very vivid imagination and I love it. The creative way of expressing the bursting feelings of the character is well-written. Amazing work!

Posted 8 Years Ago


I like this poem. Need some sad piano music to create a feel of desperation and fear. I like the tale in the poem.
"As I dig my own grave tonight
Broken memories will go forgotten
Stuffed within this coffin
Mourning the innocence you stole."
No weakness in this outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


(2nd chorus)
yeah, the perfect place!
the perfect spot!
pieces of me... YEAH!
six! feet! Beneath The GROUND!!!!!!!!!!...

this song/poem will be an instant mainstream success if it was ever produced.. the lyrics/verses (despite being kind of dire) have the potential of feeding so much life into the accompanying music.. great stuff Anna!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Sometimes the dark needs to be explored to retrieve the light.
You have painted an image of pain so vividly.
Great Poem. Keep it up, sweet Anna.

Posted 8 Years Ago


love it :) deffinately showed your emotions great job..

Posted 8 Years Ago


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I love it. The emotions are so real. Great job...........

Posted 8 Years Ago


this is amazing :D
so much description and emotion :)
love it

Posted 8 Years Ago


Loving this poem. It is creative and simply written to perfection.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*
*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*

Somewhere between TN and NYC, TN



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My name is Anna Rose... what can I say about myself? I'm 20 learning to live on my own, trying to escape from a dark part of my life. Been writing my heart since I was able to write. I write whate.. more..

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