In The Shadows

In The Shadows

A Poem by *~*Butterfly Kisses*~*

My 1st Haiku ever written.




Glowing evil eyes linger

Every twist and turn they stare

Feeding on fear of human kind.

© 2012 *~*Butterfly Kisses*~*

Author's Note

*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*
My first attempt at a Haiku. Be gentle, but I can take the criticism.

Robbie is a haiku inspiration. :)

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Sinister...but it was good...

Posted 12 Years Ago

I thought it was well written. Dark and kinda creepy!

Posted 12 Years Ago

be How can anybody say anything bad about your work? You are a wonderful writer. In all honesty, I prefer your poetry and prose. But this is good...and you will only get better over time if you continue practicing the art of haiku. Freat job on a first try my dear.


Posted 12 Years Ago

Wow, very creative and wonderful write, enjoyed muchly ; )

Posted 12 Years Ago

I love it (:

Posted 12 Years Ago

It may seek the dreamer and have him dream a nobler dream. Nice!

Posted 12 Years Ago

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ooh. that's something terrifying..but in a good way. :) you know, that feeling when you anticipate something that's horrifying. something like that.
well, for your first attempt, this is surely impressive. :) very mysterious and dark.
wonderfully crafted! :D

Posted 12 Years Ago

Nice artwork and words. Create fear and mystery. Thank you for the excellent poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago

Oooh I like this! It's a very nice haiku, especially for a first attempt. Nice job =)

Posted 12 Years Ago

Nicely done for your first time!
I wish it can be longer...
however, this is great and I like the picture in this haiku
Good piece! Keep writing! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago

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23 Reviews
Added on April 13, 2012
Last Updated on April 13, 2012
Tags: politics, stalkers, darkness


*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*
*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*

Somewhere between TN and NYC, TN

My name is Anna Rose... what can I say about myself? I'm 20 learning to live on my own, trying to escape from a dark part of my life. Been writing my heart since I was able to write. I write whate.. more..


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